Part 1
Every shot and caption, timed
15 seconds, vertical, filmed on a phone. No voice. A trending song plays low and the text on screen tells the whole story.
0 to 3sThe problem, up close
4 to 8sThe routine
8 to 11sThe product goes on
11 to 15sThe smooth reveal
| Time | What you see | Text on screen | Job |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0 to 3s | Close-up of a leg covered in small red bumps. A finger points at them. | "Me feeling insecure in 2023 wondering why I kept getting little red bumps on my skin" | Hook: the problem, in the buyer's own words |
| 4 to 8s | In the shower, scrubbing the leg. Lots of lather. | "Me in 2024 after realising that it's a skin condition caused by excess keratin" | The discovery: the problem gets a name |
| 8 to 11s | The product squeezed onto the leg, rubbed in with the hand. | "And that exfoliating helps minimise the bumps and skin texture" | Demo |
| 11 to 15s | Smooth, glossy leg. A hand strokes the skin slowly. | "To leave you with smoother, silkier skin!" | Result |
